Im going insane
i have images etched in my brain
memories of what used to be.
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Discuss these poems and read the accompanying translators' notes in that context. terza rima (the first and last lines of each three-line stanza rhyme, weighty poems above are those like Valzhyna Mort's magical New York, or
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And i wont keep crawling back to you,
because my knees are already bruised.
And im learning how to quit fallinf
for someone whose not going to catch me.
You just keep letting me hit the floor.
But i wont get hurt again,
not after everything
because it was you walked away undamaged
while you left me there alone.
And do you know what its like
seeing you content with your lie of a life?
I wish i could make you cry like me
i wish i could just make you see.
But the blind never see
and i wont let you dig my grave.
i dont know why you think
i'll always be there
as your second best.
but now you've made my life hell
because i keep coming back
to the words that broke my heart.
It isnt as good i know :/
Sorry sorry sorry
im kinda out of it
I like
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that true love doesn't always last. And happy memories stay with you but those happy moments go by fast. Words can cut deeper than any sword everything must have happened for a reason, I just haven't firgured that reason out yet. Great poem! New Comment This has to be the best poem that i have ever read!
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Oct 28, 2009 As my new book, DREW: Poems from Blue Water, was in production, I"m in that second group, though I roundly admire those in the first and wish I Rob, I read Drew last night before I left for Georgia and it made me
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Its good! I really did like it! You could tell that it came from your heart. Who cares what other think.
I think that is pretty damn good! It really expresses your emotion! Nice job :)
thats good!
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OMGGGGGG AMAZINGG
i loved this poem its ******* amaxing :D
its really good sounds like it could also be a great song
ha damn. that was good =o
i used to be able to write like that. then i switched to drawing. but anyhoo that was reallly good :]
Hun that was fantastic. Good doesn't even cover it. Amazing brilliant that was wonderful. I am sorry you are so sad. It's good though that you let your emotions out and you found a way creating wonderful poetry. Don't be so hard on yourself it was amazing.
I'm going insane
i have images etched in my brain,
memories of what used to be,
And i wont keep crawling back to you,
because my knees are already bruised.
And i'm learning how to quit falling
for someone whose not going to catch me,
You just keep letting me hit the floor.
But i wont get hurt again,
not after everything you did to me,
because it was always you walking away undamaged
while you left me there alone.
And do you know what its like?
seeing you content with your lie of a life?
I wish i could make you cry just like me,
i wish i could just make you see what you
put me threw,
But the blind never see's
and i wont let you dig my grave,
i don't know why you think
i'll always be there
as your second best,
but now you've made my life a hell
because i keep coming back
to the words that broke my heart.
I added some things in there
but in all i thought it was a very very good poem!
I love this poem.
It's not a great poem, so much, but I'll bet it's cathartic and should help you to get over whomever it was that made you feel that way.
Good for you!
You're trying to hard to make it ryhme and it seems very forced. poetry doesn't have to ryhme, I preffer free verse which follows no pattern.
darkness fall
all around me
and I hear the mourners call
as the headmans axe
falls slowly
slowly
to dismember my soul
something like that
the point your trying to drive home is nice and overall it's a good poem just don't try and force it
thats really good! its interestin to read and doesnt get all boring... if you call that bad then i would like to see what good means to you! cuz thats better than any poem i could ever write. wow... ur amazin.... u wrote that urself? were u inspired by any poet or song or whatever...?
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